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Adrianna, Adrianna
Your lips are ruby red
With eyes like whispering phantoms
Chanting love spells to the dead

You hid your heart in a gilded box
Laden with a note from a song of Old
For you so coveted the grace of spiders
To keep so beautifully alone

And naturally, I died for you
To atone my sweetest sin
I held my lifetime to your lips
In the hopes that you may thirst again

After severing the tongues of minstrels, love
I do now hold your tragic key
Now open your box and surrender the heart
That mine eyes have so longed to see

O Adrianna, Adrianna!
Had never you lain on my bed
I’d had never known the heaven
That I found in hell instead

You cast my blood ablaze, my pet
Your frosted breaths I till
Let my body be your casket, dove
And leave me quite fulfilled

Please spill my nothings through your skin
And no resistance from me may you dread
As to my neck you place your fangs
And have your lips drip ruby red

Adrianna, Adrianna
You lips are ruby red
With eyes like mine, with tempting voice
Chanting love spells through my head
:iconxxforgottenfailurexx:

Author's Comments

Made while I sat at home this halloween.
I hadnt' the candy and hadn't the costume
but I did have the heart
to make something pretty anyway. :D

It's actually quite decent
for something I made up in 15 minutes.
Yay... :D

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:iconphunke8:
That's such a pretty poem. :)
:iconbubblegum11:
That was really good. I couldn't write a poem like this, even if I wrote for an hour.

I'm envious. ^w^ Nice job.~ Very elegant and flowing.

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:teddy: :rose: :blackrose: bubblegum11 :blackrose: :rose: :teddy:
:iconquakingducky:
wow. 15 minutes? REALLY good

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Visit my gallery........or i will send my evil, rabid, emo ducks after you!
:iconlost-guide:
thats awsome babe- i love it haha that made my non-existant halloween complete ^^ haha
:iconsapphire-tora:
It's beautiful :heart:

I'll bring you some candy tomorrow :3

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I RP Matsuda at the *Mello-x-Matt 'cause I'm just that pimp!!! >D

"I've come to the conclusion that you're a total idiot." --L from Death Note ((L's Awesomeness))
:iconxrailer:
cool. i was at a party on halloween:)
:iconhpotteraddict777:
i was at a football game, watching the band nerds be even more nerdy in their costumes instead of the regular uniforms. XD i've missed reading your work, but that happens when you have school...

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When faced with the choice to love or deceive, there in lies the path to the heroes and thieves...

Join [link] brains over brawn!
:iconlesumai:
D:

Aw, Lori.

I wish you could've come here for Halloween. We'd have made up a crazy costume like toast or a killer Leprechaun and terrorized the neighborhood like idiots. I wish I could send you candy and happiness and fun through the Internet. Sadly that's one (three?) thing(s) technology can't provide.

Instead I got chased by the dude from Saw and stared at a few cars and small children with my creepy eye makeup. While you made something beautiful.

Your artist's comment sounds so depressed, despite the smileys. Feeling okay?

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"I laugh in the face of death!... Maybe not laugh... more like a quiet snicker. And I wouldn't do it directly in Death's face, so it's more like a quiet snicker behind Death's back."
:iconoceaneyedwolf:
Oh my god...
That was AMAZING Lori.
The detail and imagery...it's so beautifully constructed.

My poetry SUCKS compared to this.
Oh...and I'll bring you some canday if you want :D
Happy Samhain!
:heart:

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Blessed Be :blackrose:

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